When i hold your hand

I had long time did't hold ur rough and big hand ..

Is warm and love..

It remind me how much u care and love me when i'm was born..

When i cross the road, u hold my hand..

when go shopping, u hold my hand..

when u bring me and my sister to zoo, u hold my hand..

when u bring me some where, u hold my hand..

when u bring me go home,u hold my hand..

but it happened when i was a KID..

Now, because of Our Father prayer..

It give me opportunity to hold ur hand again..

That time, i felt that so much u love and care me,

i felt sorry to u,

my eyes full of tears,

keep dropping..

and i promise myself,

i will make u proud of me in one day..

Dady, I love u!

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